I like your final piece. It's so sad how you make the dog cry:(! I like how the reward is in green for the money wise. Also i like the beginning where it says there is no place, like home. That could catch the reader's eyes. I think you should have the font at the bottom a little smaller cause that makes them come in more. But everything else is good!:)
I like your final piece. It's so sad how you make the dog cry:(! I like how the reward is in green for the money wise. Also i like the beginning where it says there is no place, like home. That could catch the reader's eyes. I think you should have the font at the bottom a little smaller cause that makes them come in more. But everything else is good!:)
ReplyDeleteI love how you put a sign around his neck! Very creative.
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